Personal Statement for Economics

Transfer applicant prompt
What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities and what you have gained from your involvement.
I choose Economics as my major, because I have 5- years experience in learning economics in Hong Kong. Economics is also my major in Hong Kong. Economics made me changed a lot. I found that economics is the easiest subject for me. I can analyze all the question of economics accurately because of my talent of that. I joined the students’ union for the game, which is Stock Simulation. This game makes me realize that the theory of Economics could really apply at the real world. This is the one of the reason that I like Economics.
Prompt for all applicants
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?
My parents put no pressure on me, but they put all the resource on me to support me study abroad. My two sisters give up the chance to study abroad because of me. My family did all for me, which made me become a strong minded, independent and aggressive person.
This personal statement is around 1000 words. It should be separated as two topic ( see above). I hope you can add a important story which inspired me to choose economics major.